Whodunnit?

“Who is it?”
“I don’t know for sure.”
“And … you found this in our attic?”
“In the trunk we got when my Grandpa died.”
“Well, who do you think it is?”
“Uncle Joe.”

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A response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge Trifextra Week 5 image prompt.

About Fran Hart

Disciple of Christ, earning a living as the director of US-based operations for a Taiwanese company, managing an engineering organization while carving out time to write. Wife, Mother, Grandmother.
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11 Responses to Whodunnit?

  1. A missing family member found at last.

  2. Carrie says:

    dum dum DUUUUUMMMMMMM! Cue the scary music!

  3. Cool. I love a good mystery.

  4. natalie says:

    These would be great first lines to a story also!

  5. I’m glad I’m not the only one who went this route with the prompt. Nicely done.

  6. barbara says:

    and where’s the rest of Uncle Joe. 🙂

  7. k~ says:

    That was great! It sounds like a good start for a longer story.

  8. Gina says:

    Family treasures….

  9. karen says:

    Oh ho ho! (I really said this when I read the above.) Brilliant!

  10. Trifecta says:

    Oh, Joe. 🙂 Thanks for linking up this weekend. I love your response. The simplicity of the dialogue, and the brevity especially of that last line, are perfect here. Every family has secrets, but Uncle Joe’s family seems to have a big one. Hope to see you back on Monday.