Lilies aren’t always enough

Jessica sat at the piano, looking out at the globe lilies growing wild in the pasture that filled the view through her front window. Fairy lanterns. The stuff that fired her dreams when she was a young girl growing up near the shadows of Yosemite valley. Now, so many years later, time and gravity had taken their toll on her dreams as much as her figure. She wished she could run to the fields and throw herself down into flowers the way she did in her youth. Those days were gone.

She returned her focus to the student sitting on the bench beside her as he plunked the ivory keys, concentrating with puckered brow. When she’d imagined her retirement it had not been like this. She’d worked in an office for 40 years, saving diligently, investing and planning, setting up a target date fund and following the glide path defined by her financial adviser. But no one had anticipated this recession they were now experiencing or the collapsing stock market; or maybe they had but she hadn’t appreciated the implications.

The thought of glide paths reminded her of the vacations she couldn’t afford, the trips she wouldn’t be taking. Instead, she was forced to keep working, in a modified capacity, maintaining enough income to pay bills and keep the pantry stocked with soup and crackers. This wasn’t living, this was surviving, and barely that. With the back of her hand she brushed away the tear that threatened to fall, vowing to rest in the meadow of lilies when today’s lessons were through.

For the IndieInk Writing Challenge this week, Wendryn challenged me with “Globe lilies and glide paths: include them in your piece.” and I challenged MRMacrum with “He was the sort of person who pulled on doors that said “push” and could never remember his own number, so it was no wonder that….”

Images from Bob Ellis and VeggieBoards.

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Meeting Her Maker

Tuesday. A day like any other day; at least, it started much the same.

Melody woke shortly before her alarm sounded at 5:30am, as was her habit. This allowed plenty of time to read the Bible, pray and write in her journal. By 7am she’d finished her daily devotionals, fed the cats, and consumed half a pot of coffee. She was ready to get busy.

She hummed as she showered and dressed, spending little time on wardrobe and even less on make-up and jewelry. She liked to keep things simple.

She walked down four flights of stairs to the street, avoiding the temperamental elevator that often trapped those sluggards who chose to ride rather than get a little exercise. She was careful not to judge them, though; she was grateful for her good health.

When she reached street level, she burst onto the sidewalk, paused, drew in a deep breath of urban air and merged into the bustling flow of foot traffic. As she neared the end of her block, her day became anything but ordinary.

“You’re not…” she said to the man standing on the corner. A man, but not a man. An angel?

“Yes, I am. Yahweh. Emmanuel.” he said. “Come. Follow me.”

“But I’m not ready.”

“You are. It’s time.”

This was ridiculous. She was not ready and she surely wasn’t intending to go before her time. When the light changed, she proceeded to cross with the surge of pedestrians. She glanced over her shoulder and was relieved the man was gone. She questioned her perception of his glow, the almost blinding white of his clothes and his skin. Maybe she should consider cutting back on her caffeine intake.

As she stepped up onto the curb, she once again inhaled deeply, ready to renew the vigorous cadence of her morning walk. Instead, she stopped mid-stride, her lungs full, her mouth open, her eyes wide with surprise.

How could he have crossed ahead of her? Yet, here he was, waiting for her. His smile was patient, his eyes kind, and he shone with the purity described in the Book of Revelation. She blinked and exhaled.

“Why?” she asked.

“It’s time.”

She shook her head again. Her cats needed her. Her houseplants. Her neighbor, Mrs. Birch. Her boss. Her customers. She couldn’t go. Who would take care of everything?

“Excuse me. I wish I could. Really, I do. I just…can’t.”

She felt him touch her shoulder as she pushed past him, his hand resting gently there for an instant. A warmth spread through her, radiating from his touch. She glanced at her shoulder, imagining that he was somehow still holding her, although she was once again moving briskly, keeping pace with the others around her. He was gone, but his presence traveled with her.

As she continued along the same route she took every weekday morning, traversing the six short blocks from her apartment to the bookstore where she worked, she couldn’t ignore the changes taking place around her.

The sounds of the city receded. She heard what must be a babbling brook, but there were no brooks anywhere near this part of the city. And she could hear birds. Not the pigeons she was used to, but birds she couldn’t identify, tweeting and twittering, making joyful noise. A breeze, cool against her skin, carried the scent of honeysuckle. She knew that smell from her childhood, long-forgotten but unmistakable.

All of the familiar sights were gone, replaced by an infinite scattering of rainbows so refined that every molecule bore its own distinct prism that both radiated and refined the myriad. She began to count the colours; they were everywhere.

She stopped and turned, reaching out to touch the passing shapes but unable to grasp anything tangible in this new landscape. The individuals sweeping by were like clouds of dark and light. One, mostly black and brown, made her cringe. Another, swirling shades of pink and mauve, created a sense of need. Amazed, she looked down at her own blend of yellow, gold and green. The colours were pure and beautiful.

Where was he?

And he was there beside her, white light, warmth, love.

“I’m ready now.”

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For the IndieInk Writing Challenge this week, femmefauxpas challenged me with “She began to count the colours; they were everywhere. ” and I challenged Hannah Pratt with “Sunday evening you realize you’re wearing the same clothes you wore on Friday. Where did the weekend go?”.

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We’re either doing something very right or very wrong

It’s nearly impossible to keep up with our housing shenanigans. We bought a house in ’10 that we have managed as a rental. We bought another house at the end of August ’11 that we intended to flip. It was on the market, under contract, back on the market, under contract, back on the market, under contract…. We started calling it the “flop house”, but never mind about that. Just before we put it back on the market our son-in-law approached us about renting the house from us. We succumbed.

In a twist of fate, our tenants moved out of our rental property in November. Because nothing’s ever easy, the ex-tenants decided to get crafty in their efforts to get something out of their security deposit. You can’t blame them for trying, but I wish they’d at least cleaned the toilets and done some other basic housekeeping when they moved out. Also, they never paid a pet deposit and they clearly had a dog, as evidenced by dog poop in the back yard, pet odor and stains in the carpet (the professional carpet cleaner signed a statement to this effect), and other damage. Since they didn’t give adequate notice of their intention to vacate, they nullified the contract. However, the ex-tenants had someone call and try to bully Mr. H, as the “appointed representative” of the ex-tenants. I did a reverse look-up on the phone number and identified the rep as an apartment manager. Mr. H. sent certified letters to both parties (the ex-tenants owe for damages and unpaid rent). We haven’t heard a peep since. He’s considering taking the ex-tenants to small claims court.

In December, our daughter, son-in-law and two grandchildren moved into the flip house, so it became a rental property, and Mr. H was well into the rehab of the ex-rental property, making it a flip house. I joined him for some clean-up efforts, as well as some minor landscaping, planting bushes and flowers in front.

As of January 3, the “new” flip house was put on the market. On January 4, we received an offer. Today we accepted that offer.

Keep us in your prayers!

EDIT: The Buyer was missing a page in the contract. Before they could correct their error, we received another offer, with better terms! Alleluia!  

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“Empty Hallways and Ashen Faces”

We, the survivors, huddled together in a large conference room near the entrance, a room usually reserved for the principal.

They, our rescuers, looked as shocked as we. I have no doubt that not one of us greeted the day with any idea that by its end we would be survivors or rescuers. All of us, collectively and individually, students, parents and teachers, entered this building without consideration for its history or future. Only one, now finally free from his pain, knew.

He, bullied as a student, became a bullier of sorts, seeking revenge, finding vindication but ultimately losing everything.

For the IndieInk Writing Challenge this week, CrossHavenHarpest challenged me with “Empty Hallways and Ashen Faces” and I challenged Brad MacDonald with “A man, long-married, inadvertently gives his wife a gift he intended for his girlfriend.”

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If I can, you can (aka “The first day of Christmas”)

Perhaps because I’ve been immersing myself in Psalms and Proverbs, which have plenty to say about pride and humility, or perhaps for reasons best ferreted out by a professional, this year I finally participated in Neil’s annual Christmahanukwanzaakah post (his 6th).

 The reason doesn’t matter, the reality is this:

Whatever the reason, I hope that my fearless rendition inspires others to sing joyfully in praise of the LORD! If I can, you can.

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Real Estate Plot Twists

I hope that the twists and turns of the last month in our real estate saga are not indicative of what we should expect for the future.

The flip house that we couldn’t keep on (or off) the market? The one that had three offers/withdrawals in the space of about 6 weeks? Yeah, that one. It’s now under contract, again. We’re leasing it to our daughter and son-in-law (and 2 grandchildren, but we didn’t make them sign the lease).

We repaired all of the nitty-picky items identified in the first buyer’s inspection. These are not items that would typically need to be repaired for a house to be rented, and are not investments that will necessarily have any ROI down the road when we eventually sell the property. After all of that hard work, our rehab efforts will hopefully be appreciated by the new tenants. Our children. And pre-school grandchildren.

Does anyone else smell the potential for more drama? Could there possibly be any problem lurking in this arrangement?

I suppose it’s no coincidence that while all of this was going on, the tenants in our Hutto rental property moved out. Now we’re rehabbing that house, so we can put it on the market. For sale. Yep. We’re “flipping” the rental property.

We’ve owned it for about 18 months, which means there’s an unexpected financial benefit: the taxes on the transaction will shift from short term capital gains to long term capital gains.

So, the house we were renting, we’re now flipping; the house we were flipping, we’re now renting. We need to sell one before we buy another; so, Mr. H. is busy tearing out linoleum and putting in tile, contracting a painter, etc. prepping the Hutto house for sale. We’ll need to start looking for the next house soon.

Oh, and, we are sliding into the worst months for Real Estate transactions:

February appears to be the WORST month for real estate (at least according to this data). I think it’s a buyer’s market in winter and a seller’s market in Spring/Summer. Since we’re buying AND selling, I’m not sure how this will work.

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How the race was “won”

If you caught my post on November 13, you already know that this year’s attempt to write a novel in November got off to a rough start. By “rough start” I mean, as of then I hadn’t really started.

If I wanted to write about Real Estate Drama, I had plenty to inspire me. Our flip house went on and off the market more times than a (I’ll spare you the colorful analogy). And our tenants moved out of our Hutto house, leaving a mess behind (of course). Thanksgiving was spent in Marietta, Georgia. The 2,000 mile trip was a blessing…and a curse, at least with respect to my selfish desire to write a novel.

Because I’m an engineer, I think some stories can best be told graphically. Here is a plot of the target 1,667 words per day, compared to my actual results:

If it looks like I had a slow start, you’re reading this correctly. When we left home on November 22, I was approximately 30,000 words behind schedule. When we got back home on the 27th, I was only about 25,000 words behind. I was catching up!

I then proceeded to run a marathon at a sprinter’s pace. I wrote 10,000 words per day for three days. I stayed home from work on Monday (28th), but I went into the office and worked the next two days. When I wasn’t in the office, I wrote as if my life depended on it. Who knows? In some respects, maybe it did.

I didn’t need NaNoWriMo.org to tell me I’m a winner, but a little affirmation never hurts. I must pass on credit where credit is due; I had tremendous support from family and friends, who never lost confidence in me (or at least, they never let on, if they did). And, I trusted that if God wanted this race won, He had what it took to get me across the finish line. In the end, to God goes the glory.

If you’re keeping score, this is my 3rd NaNoWriMo completed, but I can’t claim to have finished a third novel. I have a few chapters left to write before the story is done. I’ll post an update then; we’ll see how well I do writing the last few thousand words.  Technically, this race ain’t over ’til it’s over.

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Real Estate, Holidays and Word Counts

Two weeks ago, on November 13th, I started writing a novel for NaNoWriMo. Sure, I should have started on November 1st, since the whole point is that November is National Novel Writing Month. But the first 2 weekends were tied up with travel to Camp Allen (Cursillo and the Evangelism Conference – both are worthy causes). And I do have a full-time job that keeps me busy.

Meanwhile, our tenants moved out of a rental property (leaving us with plenty to clean/repair) and we’ve had some challenges with the flip house. The flip house is currently not on the market as Mr. H. is finishing repairs to the garage floor, following repairs to the sewage line, following repairs to the foundation. He’s going to paint/finish the garage and we’re going to increase the asking price for the house. At least, that’s the plan. The point is, I’ve also had some extra-curricular challenges.

On Day 1 of my novel writing effort (November 13th) I finished fewer than 500 words. Not a problem if Day 1 was November 1, but I was almost halfway into the month. I limped along, trying to get rolling, building steam, anticipating the Thanksgiving Holiday. My assumption was that the 2,000 mile round trip to my sister’s house in Georgia would offer many plenty of opportunity to write and write and write. I was partially right, but there were also plenty of distractions and demands on my attention, as I am the chief co-pilot and navigator. Not to mention that family visits require, well, visiting.

My daily word count has steadily increased. I’m now cranking out several thousand words per day. As of today, my total word count is just under 20,000 words. I need to write 10,000 words per day for the next 3 days in order to “succeed” in this year’s challenge. No matter what happens, I’m glad that I’m forcing myself to press on.

During our family visit, I solicited plot twist ideas and received two: a fiery explosion and a prison riot. I’ve incorporated both. I would appreciate any additional suggestions. These ideas are a great way for me to add words. Don’t worry about relevance or continuity, that’s the fun I get to have with your ideas.

Please leave a comment with your plot twist suggestion(s). 

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Things for which I’m thankful

Next week is Thanksgiving: Why wait to share all that fills us with gratitude? I’m following Michael Hyatt’s lead and posting about the attitude of gratitude. Today I carried a pocket cross, and I plan to renew my habit of keeping this glass cross in my pocket so that when I reach into my pocket and touch it, I’m reminded to be thankful in the moment.

Colossians 4:2 “Devote yourselves to prayer, being watchful and thankful.”

  1. Life itself: the very opportunity to live and breathe and worship.
  2. My husband, Mr. H. I’m blessed by his constant presence in my life, and the balance he offers.
  3. My children, who keep me humble.
  4. My talents, the gifts that bless me.
  5. My parents, who raised me to strive for the moon.
  6. My ability to read, discern, question.
  7. My love of reading.
  8. My love of writing.
  9. My prayer group – we meet every Wednesday, 7am, Einstein Bagels.
  10. My church family.
  11. The bounty I’ve received: my home, a full pantry, a full closet; all of my basic needs are met.
  12. Dark chocolate (all luxuries which delight the senses).
  13. Leaders who inspire, such as Michael Hyatt, my priest, my boss, my husband.
  14. My health.
  15. Music, which inspires and entertains, soothing and engaging.
  16. The diversity of gifts found in the community of the body (it’s not all up to me!), and all of my friends, each bringing their gifts to bear.
  17. The freedom found in the society in which I live.
  18. Those who defend the freedom I enjoy.
  19. The promise of the kingdom.
  20. The sacrifice which sanctifies.
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Back on the market

We’ve lost another round with our flip house. The 2nd buyer has backed out based on the inspection. Mr. H is back on site making some additional repairs. I did not expect there to be this much drama in the contract phase. Apparently we’re not having trouble finding interested buyers, but we are having trouble in keeping them.

I haven’t seen the full list of items but I do know that Mr. H is getting the opportunity to work on his door-replacing skills. The craft of taking a door off the shelf at Home Depot and installing the knobs and hinges is trickier than you might imagine. It’s worth replacing the doors if that’s what’s preventing these contracts from sticking. I’ll try to post some before/after photos for reference.

UPDATE: I finally reviewed THE LIST. I’m not sure why our agent didn’t forward this to us when he received it following the first inspection, but we have it now and Mr. H is busily addressing the issues. Since we paid to have the AC repaired during the rehab phase, the claim that the AC’s not working properly will be addressed by the repairman who worked on it. Some of the items are minor or questionable (lots of “as needed” comments in the list – makes me wonder if that’s stock for all inspections). Other items will require an expert, such as having our friend who does roofs look at the roof. And we’ll hire a plumber to address the apparent break in the sewer line…under the house. By comparison, other items are nice-to-haves. I suppose we could make those repairs and increase the asking price of the house. For now, we’re focusing on the must-haves. Like a working sewer line.

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